Friday, 27 September 2019
Number 28
Thump...Thump...Thump... His stomps thundered down the road. causing the road to rumble, dogs to howl in back yards. And old laydes to look out of there bedroom window with weird looks on there faces. This metallic machine meant business. "Number 28 checking in. Over." He spoke into his radio set built in his helmet. He was talking to Professor Stupido, the worlds greatest uneventer. The instructions crackled through the earpiece he knew what to do... His job was to destroy the town. a few hours later he destroyed the town. Then he used his rocket boots to fly to base. Then he met Professor Stupido. Professor Stupido was so glad that he unevented number 28! The End.
Thursday, 19 September 2019
Thursday, 12 September 2019
Making Films
Wednesday, 11 September 2019
A Special Note From Me!
Hi! Your probably thinking why i haven't added a link to a story of Richie McCaw. It's because one day i was about to make a new book but then it said that the library was full. ;( so now i'm going to a new hero. It's probably Dame Valerie Adams. So Yeah!...........Thanks😀.
Tuesday, 10 September 2019
Friday, 6 September 2019
Wednesday, 4 September 2019
Plan for writing - Richie McCaw
Examples of the type of sentences I might use:
It was cold - I can see my breath in front of me and feel my self shivering in the cool night air / my breath came out in short pants making dragon puffs in front of me
I was nervous - My heart began to pound as sweat began to pour down my face
The crowd was noisy - I could hear the sounds of people chanting filling the stadium
I was afraid when the other team ran at me - My hands trembled and I had to clutch the ball with all my strength.
I could hear my feet on the ground - the thundering of my feet on the ground sounded like a heard of wild elephants charging
I was excited because we won - pride bubbled up inside me to the point I couldn't hold back the huge smile that beamed across my face
It was cold - I can see my breath in front of me and feel my self shivering in the cool night air / my breath came out in short pants making dragon puffs in front of me
I was nervous - My heart began to pound as sweat began to pour down my face
The crowd was noisy - I could hear the sounds of people chanting filling the stadium
I was afraid when the other team ran at me - My hands trembled and I had to clutch the ball with all my strength.
I could hear my feet on the ground - the thundering of my feet on the ground sounded like a heard of wild elephants charging
I was excited because we won - pride bubbled up inside me to the point I couldn't hold back the huge smile that beamed across my face
Monday, 2 September 2019
Sunday, 1 September 2019
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