Sick sentences

Here is the sick sentence that I am going to fix: The man walked up the path towards the top. He was wearing warm clothes. It was windy. He was scared.

Battling fatigue and fear the man pushed his way towards the top, the howling gale chilling him to the bones despite the layers of clothing he was wearing in an attempt to protect himself from the conditions.

Here is the next one: A man stood in the snow. It was really cold. He wore a coat. It was ripped. He wanted to climb the cliff.

A lone man stood in the snow gazing up at the challenge ahead of him. His Grandad's old army jacket was no protection from the frosty world that surrounded him.