Kia ora guys today I have done an activity for the summer learning journey. For this activity I had to make a positive, helpful and thoughtful comment. I have made a comment on Rutva's blog and he is from my school.
My name is Charlotte and I am a blog commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey. I thought that the quality comment you posted about was fantastic!
It is very cool that you were able to create a thoughtful, positive, and helpful comment! I really liked how you made connections with the person whose blog you were commenting on. I think that this is a great way to create a positive comment.
I noticed that you wrote about an elephant in your comment! I think elephants are awesome animals. What is your favourite animal?
Kia Ora Floyd. My name is Titan from Room 23. I like the way you ended your comment with a question because I always leave a question at the end of my comment. You brought me back when I did my SLJ blog commenting thing. Next time, you could include more information just to make it a bit more interesting. How long did it take you to do this?. Thanks for sharing your learning. You should check out my blog. My blog Blog you later, Titan.
Hello Floyd, I like the way you introduced yourself and then complimented the author just like the cyber smart commenting criteria. Also I like the way you gave the author feedback to make their post more eye catching. Great work !
Mōrena Floyd,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Charlotte and I am a blog commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey. I thought that the quality comment you posted about was fantastic!
It is very cool that you were able to create a thoughtful, positive, and helpful comment! I really liked how you made connections with the person whose blog you were commenting on. I think that this is a great way to create a positive comment.
I noticed that you wrote about an elephant in your comment! I think elephants are awesome animals. What is your favourite animal?
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Ngā mihi nui
Charlotte
Summer Learning Journey
Kia Ora Floyd. My name is Titan from Room 23. I like the way you ended your comment with a question because I always leave a question at the end of my comment. You brought me back when I did my SLJ blog commenting thing. Next time, you could include more information just to make it a bit more interesting. How long did it take you to do this?.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your learning. You should check out my blog.
My blog
Blog you later,
Titan.
Hello Floyd, I like the way you introduced yourself and then complimented the author just like the cyber smart commenting criteria. Also I like the way you gave the author feedback to make their post more eye catching. Great work !
ReplyDeleteDo you like elephants?
Nita