This is today's sick sentence: The big giant opened his mouth and yelled. His big head was a grey colour. He was really big and angry.
Now to make it healthy.... The humongous giant shock his bolder like head from side to side in exasperation. From out of his enormous mouth came a roar so loud it made peoples ears bleed!!
Kia Ora Floyd. Thank you for sharing your 'Sick Sentences' once again. Your sick sentences are really amazing! I like how you made a great description about the giant, Like...'From out of his enormous mouth came a roar, so loud it made people's ears bleed!'
ReplyDeleteWell done Floyd!
Blog you later!
~Alofa